Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by capnnerefir » Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:26 pm

A good idea, and one that I've tried to incorporate. Most of their old tricks don't work, so it calls for more...inventive...morphing. Thanks for the suggestion.

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by Elfangor » Mon Feb 09, 2009 1:51 am

Ahh once again a brilliant book by the Captain himself I cant wait to read the next (which is why in about 10 seconds from now ill be reading it :) ) oh i also cant wait for more Drode ( but i have to)


Also one last thing minor typo
Just over halfway through chapter 16 capnnerefir wrote:I didn’t tell her about the confusion I was feeling. I hadn’t meant to say that last party anyway. It would only worry her and I already worried her enough.

Oh and somewhere else im not sure where but its after chapter 16 Tobias say I was felling god im not sure if that meant, I was feeling good or, I was feeling like a god but i somehow doubt the latter
You all have guns
And you never put the safety on
And you all have plans,
To take it



Don't Take It

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by capnnerefir » Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:26 am

Thanks, Elfangor. And yeah, I meant good, not God. Maybe I should invest in some sort of proofreader...

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by dreamz » Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:21 pm

capnnerefir wrote:Maybe I should invest in some sort of proofreader...
If you're serious, I can do that if you want me to. I've been showing you your typos anyway. ;)

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by Elfangor » Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:55 pm

dreamz wrote:
capnnerefir wrote:Maybe I should invest in some sort of proofreader...
If you're serious, I can do that if you want me to. I've been showing you your typos anyway. ;)
I wouldnt mind helping, to tell you the truth when i read your work i often look for mistake so i can post them anyway.
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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by capnnerefir » Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:04 pm

Thanks. I'll keep both of you in mind. Proof reading (for mechanics, at least) isn't my strong suit. I'm more about the quality of the story than the nuts and bolts of it.

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by dreamz » Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:48 pm

capnnerefir wrote:Thanks. I'll keep both of you in mind. Proof reading (for mechanics, at least) isn't my strong suit. I'm more about the quality of the story than the nuts and bolts of it.
:D You just made me think of Bolts the Talking Rat.

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by capnnerefir » Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:33 pm

I know. I think of Bolts the Talking Rat every time I use that phrase.

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by freded21 » Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:09 pm

damn you caonnerefir you got down down down to mephistos cafe stuck in my head im listening to it even as I type
I <3 the Animorphs

I just had a AFF moment. My friends and I were talking about people who use others and I say:
"yeah it's like when someone only makes 5 posts then leaves and never comes back."
No one knew what I was talking about...

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Re: Animorphs #60: The Offensive (FINALLY, TIME TO SMASH YEERK!)

Post by capnnerefir » Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:58 pm

Yeah; I have that problem sometimes. I've got Indestructible going in mine right now, but there's something irresistible about Streetlight. Try Somewhere In the Between; that usually gets it out for me.