David meets Severus.

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David meets Severus.

Post by BSerAkafanofblake » Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:43 pm

Yes this an aniomorphs Harry potter crossover. What can I say I'm obbessed. (sp?)
Chapter 1 david.
We had made a deal. Rachel had promised not to return me to the island if I kept my mouth shut about the whole "Humans with the power to morph deal." Now I was local mcdonalds trying to not throw up. Suddenly I was picked up by my tail. I found myself eye to eye with some who had a someone with a squashed nose and greassy hair. "I guess you'll have to do." he said an put me in a cage.
What do you guys think so far. I'm using the movie versions of the charcters so Severus won;t be hook-nosed in this story. And no he's not going to use David as a potion indgredent., (sp?). BTW this takes place after ootp. aka order of the pheonix.

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So this fic is either going to be Severitus which is Severus as Harrry's real dad or Snarry which is Harry/Severus. Which one should I pick?
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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by Sassy_Cat » Sun Feb 20, 2011 10:58 am

...... there is more, right? 'Cause that was too short for my liking.
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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by JMRCTA » Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:34 pm

I wish for more! It's cool! Post more! Post more! Post more!
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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by BSerAkafanofblake » Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:21 pm

Thanks.
Chapteer 2 severous
After apparting back to the edge of the wards I went to my quarters and stuck the rat in it's cage. "I think I'll call you al short for albino." I said. I then looked at the clock. class was about to begin.
chapter 3 david
Several people came into the room. Most of them did a double take when they saw me. "I wonder how long it';s going to take for the git to use it as a potions ingredent." a red haired boy whispered to a boy with dark hair. 30 point from gryfindor for talking out of turn." The "person" who had captured me said.
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so anyway because I don;t feel comfortable writing them I'm going to use initials for the adualts last names. Same thing with you-know-who's fake name.
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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by War-Prince Arleal-Breeyar-Fangor » Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:37 pm

Those chapters are a little short.

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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by BSerAkafanofblake » Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:34 pm

*shrugs* that's because I've justr writen a few fics and don;t have the hang of it.
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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by Sassy_Cat » Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:32 pm

Just speed it up.
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Re: David meets Severus.

Post by JMRCTA » Fri Mar 18, 2011 5:42 pm

So... is it good to write little chapters?
Cuz I'm going to try one. :D
hptwiani got a great grammar, same as Sass and others.
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